tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315590614767346504.post5041567631241689517..comments2023-09-29T01:36:09.155-07:00Comments on Stories to Share: New query letterTess Julia http://www.blogger.com/profile/17850176812284692371noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315590614767346504.post-21717693499400199652012-05-19T10:54:51.670-07:002012-05-19T10:54:51.670-07:00You made a very good point! I'll change that. ...You made a very good point! I'll change that. "Simple" can have a negative connotation and that isn't what I wanted here. Thanks for your feedback. :)Tess Julia https://www.blogger.com/profile/17850176812284692371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315590614767346504.post-81039780143089266952012-05-18T22:40:10.962-07:002012-05-18T22:40:10.962-07:00Ooo, I like this! You've gotten things much ti...Ooo, I like this! You've gotten things much tighter this time around. One thing I wondered about was when you wrote "Bella Vista is an idyllic setting where she bonds with the simple people..." I was thinking maybe the word "local" would be better than "simple." When I hear "simple" I think of 'simple minded people.' Just a thought. Also, I'm passing a blog award your way when you get a moment! (:Elise Fallsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14734537117333738468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315590614767346504.post-62951933880314757092012-05-16T16:35:47.958-07:002012-05-16T16:35:47.958-07:00How rude of me! Thanks for stopping by and joining...How rude of me! Thanks for stopping by and joining my blog.Tess Julia https://www.blogger.com/profile/17850176812284692371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315590614767346504.post-56298178492042116242012-05-16T16:34:20.958-07:002012-05-16T16:34:20.958-07:00Is she published yet? I'd love to check her ou...Is she published yet? I'd love to check her out- blog, twitter, etc.Tess Julia https://www.blogger.com/profile/17850176812284692371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315590614767346504.post-15258143978196043372012-05-16T16:33:35.117-07:002012-05-16T16:33:35.117-07:00I'll be here!I'll be here!Tess Julia https://www.blogger.com/profile/17850176812284692371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315590614767346504.post-33727659147220076962012-05-16T16:25:05.428-07:002012-05-16T16:25:05.428-07:00I know a Canadian anthologist from Alberta who'...I know a Canadian anthologist from Alberta who's writes in your genre. Claire Allum. Your story and hers have lots in common. The romance is wonderfully done, both set in SA, both intriguing and seductive. Not sure why I'm mentioning this, except I think birds of a feather should hang out together. <br /><br />Thanks for visiting my blog, Honey. <br /><br /><a href="http://cluculzwriter.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow"> Joylene Nowell Butler, Author </a>Joylene Nowell Butlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04497637513532136615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315590614767346504.post-50448904394310152292012-05-16T14:46:46.044-07:002012-05-16T14:46:46.044-07:00Fun! I'm going to email you! ;)Fun! I'm going to email you! ;)Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15747144518868320969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315590614767346504.post-50586216886413988342012-05-16T09:27:43.319-07:002012-05-16T09:27:43.319-07:00Thank you! I appreciate your thoughts.Thank you! I appreciate your thoughts.Tess Julia https://www.blogger.com/profile/17850176812284692371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315590614767346504.post-32991318388621394092012-05-16T08:40:40.852-07:002012-05-16T08:40:40.852-07:00thanks for your comment - yeah it's always som...thanks for your comment - yeah it's always something. I know nothing about query letters but the story does sound like a good one. Best of lucksuehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315590614767346504.post-86206754634335476382012-05-16T07:10:39.385-07:002012-05-16T07:10:39.385-07:00No comments is better than, "It's terribl...No comments is better than, "It's terrible," so I'll take it! Thanks as always for your support. :)Tess Julia https://www.blogger.com/profile/17850176812284692371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315590614767346504.post-50919211219408971642012-05-16T04:03:53.707-07:002012-05-16T04:03:53.707-07:00I'm struggling to write my own synopsis so I d...I'm struggling to write my own synopsis so I don't really have any comments but it sounds great. I can't wait to read this.S.P. Bowershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09746614009206426805noreply@blogger.com